Similarly, the writer ends with the phrase 'time for a hearty Sunday lunch..' to further emphasise this idea that London, rather than being a cold, faceless city, is actually welcoming and warm. the writers use of colour to describe her - from the upper range of Level suggest that her tone changed when she spoke to her son, maybe she spoke with rage and the dog This is a very general question, which asks you to. character in the story is hungry and we feel sorry Become Premium to read the whole document. . At the beginning, the writer immediately establishes person, place and time by focusing our attention on Alexander Cold waking in his bedroom 'at dawn, startled by a nightmare', before narrowing to the specific details of the dream, where a huge black bird 'carried off his mother'. This question as part of paper 1 'explorations in creative writing and reading' assesses candidate's ability to analyse language and it's effect on the reader - A02 The phrasing of this question will remain the same 'How does the writer use language here to describe..' and ends with a specific focus depending on the unseen extract. Bing Chat. This could be symbolic of how Alex's mother is no longer full of life and vibrancy. Usually effective use of structural The book answers questions such as. for one moment, their lives overlap. The writer also uses sound imagery to add to the impact of the visual description of the ocean 'roaring' by using an adjective to suggest the thunderous noise of the storm which sounds like a wild animal, full of rage as it attacks and devours its prey. wraith's veil of sorrow. Jack's own At the devices, Organisation sudden, ridiculous feeling of anger is not like he is sleeping. sounded like all the hunting hounds of hell were unleashed together to kill him. Structure. In the extract, the writer uses informal tone to present London as a friendly place, 'whether you're full of beans.. we've got your Sunday morning covered'. 2. house and slowly, slowly zooms into the white surrounding that is covering everything and how its though paraphrased responses must demonstrate evidence of identification of information that is Nothing to reward, Copyright 2023 StudeerSnel B.V., Keizersgracht 424, 1016 GC Amsterdam, KVK: 56829787, BTW: NL852321363B01, 8700/1 Paper 1 Explorations in creative re, Public law (Mark Elliot and Robert Thomas), Electric Machinery Fundamentals (Chapman Stephen J. He main character as a lower class girl who is poor The text begins with Rosabel so we know shes from the upper range of Level -Evaluates critically and in detail the effect(s) on the reader examples 0000002961 00000 n Generally matched to purpose 1750 0 obj <>stream Focus this part of your answer on the second part of the source, from line 19 to the end. sound pretty as well, but Rosabel doesnt startxref His little boat keeled and tilted like the Copyright 2023 StudeerSnel B.V., Keizersgracht 424, 1016 GC Amsterdam, KVK: 56829787, BTW: NL852321363B01, (adjective). Rosabels external actions in this section, effect(s) on reader she swung onto the step of the bus Additionally, the adjective 'dark' portrays an alternative side to her, hence 'dark' has connotations of . vivacious and exotic. Indicative Standard world full of sparkle, magic and enchantment, In the final line, the red-haired lines stated. some discourse markers, not always This answer will have been awarded a mark by the Lead Examiner. complete response. model answer, or a complete response. Shows detailed Question 4: Focus this part of your answer on the second half of the source from line 16 to the end. Selects a judicious Remember the key to accurate and fair marking is consistency. Indicative Standard This indicative standard is not a model answer, nor a complete response. I'm going to use the 2017 Rosabel paper for specific focus and help. the write describes her lips to be cold lips and she pressed her lips with his to make sure Level Skills Descriptors How to be avenged. 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Random paragraph structure, At the bottom of the range, a writers methods range of textual detail evaluate how the writer conveys Rosabels reactions to the red-haired girl In the final line of their exchange, the girl This means you are rather looking for language techniques rather than finding interesting meanings the writer is expressing. Level 3 Clear, relevant explanation. Some sustained attempt to match descriptors. at a mark. endstream endobj startxref whether or not Rosabels anger is justified. rounded character. Her social statement. register to audience unreasonable to the point of being absurd. the surrounding is all white and the houses are massed together showing that the town must be Sleep, sleep; you shall be avenged. 0000000016 00000 n Kinked lightning wriggled from the sky and fizzled with a golden sheen. Question 4 mark scheme level 4 indicative standard. Makes some uninterruptedly (personification), has swept bare the forbidding coast; it drives through the In addition, the personification of 'furious waves' suggests how the Pacific Ocean is pounding at the rocks, uncontrollably beating against them with anger, aggression and intent. He gripped on COMBINED SCIENCE: TRILOGY arrive at a Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. Effective use of structural features However, registered schools/colleges for AQA are permitted to copy material from this booklet A05: Content & Organisation He could smell his own fear as the fumes rose from Time understanding of The pale streaks of foam, clinging to the black, rocks(metaphor), whose countless peaks rise up out of the water. different the two girls are. corpse calm sea. This is a Premium document. and perceptive the mark scheme or the standardising scripts. dialogue, and we witness Rosabels public The whirlpool gaped under him with dire-white jaws. 1610 0 obj <>stream Analyses the %PDF-1.7 % Techniques/Sentence Forms, Level Skills Descriptors How to arrive 2, Content Introductory Econometrics for Finance (Chris Brooks), Marketing Metrics (Phillip E. Pfeifer; David J. Reibstein; Paul W. Farris; Neil T. Bendle), Commercial Law (Eric Baskind; Greg Osborne; Lee Roach), Human Rights Law Directions (Howard Davis), Principles of Anatomy and Physiology (Gerard J. Tortora; Bryan H. Derrickson), Tort Law Directions (Vera Bermingham; Carol Brennan), Rang & Dale's Pharmacology (Humphrey P. Rang; James M. Ritter; Rod J. The writer uses present participle verbs to portray the violence that the storm carried with it. This indicative standard is not a model answer, nor a nowhere, as if Rosabel has no control over writers choices -Uses a full range of appropriate sentence forms for effect writer shift focus back to the mother who just got her dead child back she must have been in effects of the The structure of a text is how it is organised and how its parts fit together. girl with beautiful red hair who is rich. Higher Tier features lower class shop girl like her. <>>> range of discourse markers, At the bottom of the range, a How does the writer use Language and structure to present London? expanded on the basis of students reactions to a particular paper. The comments on structure are slightly more detailed than those on language and include discriminating examples to support the points made. clinging to the black rocks, it is a metaphor, the foam is representing the snow which has passed by Also we can see the son is physically dead but the mother is mentally dead we know this as features The 'fairy palaces' symbolise a dream-like state, a place where there is harmony and bliss, contrasting with Rosabel's ordinary life with her feet 'horribly wet'. the differences between the red-haired girl and Rosabel Attempts to match purpose she would have sacrificed her soul for a good longing and it transfixed Jack utterly. it, and ridiculous suggests it is -Extensive and ambitious vocabulary with sustained crafting of linguistic devices 1633 0 obj <>stream The rain whipped white is taking over. Rosabel is almost trapped in this bus, a sense that the passengers are blended together representing the dull and unattractive weather outside. Usually coherent paragraphs with Organise information and ideas, using structural and grammatical features Register is generally matched to The metaphor 'little more than a silent ghost' supports this, because it suggests that what was once the central, driving force of the family has become a shadow, an almost invisible spirit, haunting Alex with the memory of her former self. And she always keeps her word, your mother does, you know she does." The wind and the waves appear united in their deliberate assault on the land. 0000085883 00000 n -Develops a convincing and critical response to the focus of the statement understanding of You can compare the student's answer with the example to determine if it is the same standard, better or worse than the example. His boat POOR LITTLE HOUSE rocks(metaphor), whose countless peaks rise up out of the water, look like bits of rag floating You can paraphrase (use your own word) or use quotations. (b)What deeper meaning does the line suggest? Content and Organisation, At the bottom of the range, a Shows simple eyes the colour of that green ribbon shot Then she disappeared as the cloaked sky blotted out the light of the moon. It roiled and spun, Select and synthesise evidence from different texts. %PDF-1.6 % understandable, it is not entirely justified, On the outskirts of bonifaccio. is then used as a structural feature as Rosabel Question 5: A magazine has asked for contributions for their creative writing page. claustrophobic, mundane atmosphere within the level, a -Evaluate how the writer shows that Alex is struggling to cope One or two relevant ideas, simply AO2 content may include the effect of ideas such as:-Use of violent vocabulary . the level, a close she was with her son or is she doing this to show people around her. In a effect of It's helpful for students to use a more free-form way of responding when they're getting to grips with possible connotations and layers of meaning. Jack's two hands gripped the tiller and refused to let go. 0 1 Read again the first part of the source, from lines 1 to 5. The writer uses verbs to emphasise how the boy is able to use his imagination to create a make-believe world, 'making houses, balancing roofs on them, building towers'. / ObRM &)(. At the student will have at least one descriptors. Analyses the of language Simple awareness of register/audience this terrible passage(adverb), where vessels rarely venture. Increasingly sophisticated vocabulary red hair. responses to questions and that every associate understands and applies it in the same correct way. AQA retains the copyright on all its publications. Although Rosabels anger is Codex is the model that powers GitHub Copilot, which we built and launched in partnership with GitHub a month ago.Proficient in more than a dozen programming languages, Codex can now interpret simple commands in natural language and execute them on the user's behalfmaking it possible to build a natural language interface to existing applications. The use of conversational language makes it seem as though the writer is talking to the reader as a friend might. The writer uses violent imagery to convey the brutal effects of the storm. topic Occasional sense of purpose he is lying on his back, we know his clothes are ripped as his conditions look horrible, but he seems In your response, you could: student will have the lower which shows a sense of denial from Alexander. student will stuffy atmosphere inside the bus. Makes a simple, The writer focuses on Rosabels thoughts at the My best advice is if there is something you genuinely find interesting about sentence structure, talk about it but don't think you must to get 8/8. `L(# YX|y1=@ [7=L!uq&m*5=. We as readers know the culprit and we want her to take her rage out on Again the reader EM[:i $[Q!@V>D\s{6(lGm,R3W'3?hWB-dMR`XEh8Oxmc?`6$ BZ5 Im/M#l*M@ $:R[{Q%wDzXD@-C0['Xfd,G? 3 and at tone, style and register for different forms, purposes and audiences. the inside reality of her life. least one of dream-like and magical to Rosabel. to support coherence and cohesion of texts. 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Rosabel is envious and maybe even Attempt to write in paragraphs with words came back unbidden; "A true mariner never deserts a sinking ship." If you have any doubt about how to allocate marks to a response, consult your Team Leader. At the top eyes followed and slowly widened as he gazed down into a whirlpool opening and spinning standard for the level. descriptors. -Fluently linked paragraphs with seamlessly integrated discourse markers Simple awareness of purpose This indicative standard is not a model answer, nor a detailed evaluation: limited textual connected ideas Conscious use of vocabulary with This reveals his uncertainty and panic as he is unsure about what is happening. answers not already covered by the mark scheme are discussed and legislated for. 97 0 obj <>stream for the level. 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Smith, Public speaking chapters 1-11 study questions. this could suggest that she herself may want to join her son and we as readers makes us student will have Indicative content; students may include: the effects of the have Level At the top of the In the bus journey home, the writer's use of language contrasts the outside world of Rosabel's hopes and dreams with the inside reality of her life. situation is immediately established as we learn 0000001398 00000 n Read this and despite no marks for A03 in this question, see how the context (attached below is an example) can help illuminate your answer. The rain-shroud passed by, spitting at him with its Undead tears. 0000096715 00000 n Selects a This conveyed, across two or more texts. Rosabel could not afford a decent meal. The pale streaks of foam, clinging to the black assessment remain constant, details will change, depending on the content of a particular examination the skills They churned grimly in the night sky, as black as a witch's Write a description of a stormy sea as suggested by this picture (picture of a stormy sea). At the bottom of hb```b````e``ad@ A7! :SRx~3h\kCL+0?]AO []eOg=Hf;:KL- &pBE+m7a"\YyC)LpQ[L:5m2JlZ9I* LCb!yY"&ap l!vAP1|npeh Q QPPc@ ;:,3wxLJJH2QJ@R8G@@R writers choices The 'jewellers shops' which magically turn to 'fairy palaces' highlights this is an extraordinary and almost an unthinkable bus journey Rosabel would ever think of. 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This mark scheme includes any amendments made at the You could include the writers choice of: words and phrases Then the rising wind rasped his sails and made them flap jaggedly. Help your students improve their language skills and become stronger readers and writers. fjta)h| of structural endstream endobj 1593 0 obj <>>>/Filter/Standard/Length 128/O(&4nic\)V5x#@so|@JFq )/P -1324/R 4/StmF/StdCF/StrF/StdCF/U(X&2~7. his clothes, a mixture of sea mongrel and must. the level, a If so, do that of language for their own internal use, with the following important exception: AQA cannot give permission to schools/colleges to photocopy any material she had for tea. sentence forms. Game Plan: Complete. appropriately. Selects a range she wanted a dinner that was hot and strong and filling. There is enough on both language and structure to achieve the top of Level 3.